Driving into a Brick Wall while having Sex
That sums up this song.
It grabs you by the throat and lets you suck on its horribly disfigured, gargantuan, cybernetic... drumline. It's cold, tough, driving, hardstep/darkstep which would fit well in any high-octane chase scene featuring spaceships hurling projectiles at eachother with railguns!
That doesn't quite tell you a whole lot about the actual song, but maybe you could continue this song with a mean breakbeat a la Spor or Limewax rather than let it end with a whisper. It just needs a climactic BANG, that would really perfect it.